Wednesday, May 16, 2007

Aware times

Mist covers the mind
Chillness touches the heart
As wet the shirt
Imagination dances inside
Wakes the small small happiness
That gives sweetness thoughts

On the decision of enjoying myself
With my memories to
Keep away form craving
Could revolve only on limited
In much wishes to explore in future

Evergreen mountains in background
Imaginary colorful blooming flowers
Shaking tall lean eucalyptus trees
Feeling to bringing the natural breeze
Inside four walls of my room
Artifice coolers couldn’t give
The real attention to mind.

8 comments:

priya said...

You still have those beautiful kodai hills background in your mind isn't it jeev. May be you shud take a small vacation and enjoy your trip their.

Kavi said...

You paint such a vivid picture with your poetry Jeevan! Many thanks for sharing !

balar said...

Beautiful poetry Jeevan..:)
As priya said, take a vacation and go to Kodais..
but dont forget the kodai lake..:))

Keshi said...

Jeevan u have become quite a great philosopher n a brilliant poet!

Keshi.

geetha said...

Nice poem :)

Jeevan said...

Priya - Kodai was also a reason for this aware, but deep thought about close ones.

Kavi – Thank you friend:)

Balar – Thanks. Just wanted to hang in some hill areas, but a time have to for it! Hoping… let’s see:)

Keshi – :) Thank u dear! its great from u.

Geetha – Thank you:)

tulipspeaks said...

Feel good reading it.. dont know why though. :)


ammu.

தூயா said...

touching jeeva....