Sunday, March 09, 2008

More than seaside

Gone to beat the warm or to spent time
just ashore cold waves pass along, with
wandering of girls across me and others
like a ramp show on the walkers’
glimpse of array in beauty of fashion

Where situation turns practically familiar
many wondering still in twenty first century
looking at short skirts and sleeveless, but until
parents and society to accept the trend
it’s a sweet treat for sight;

Just looking at the rose forever
not to picking it just for hours
so like fashion that views beautiful
till it not violence the culture in fashion

To notify it was women’s day or couples day
coming up behind pathway never end today,
shoulder to shoulder moving on pleasure
and strangely unknowing the passion of couple
disturbance the public with pressure

Ice-cream tasting after long back
under the peer trouble of feeling cold
after visible of teens sitting beside front
my age to decrease of not caring abnormal.

9 comments:

priya said...

When fashion changes, society is always under pressure.

Alok said...

I enjoyed the layers u put across ur thoughts and thus were able to say so much

Alok

Keshi said...

u r fantastic Jeevan!

Keshi.

Ghost Particle said...

//Just looking at the rose forever
not to picking it just for hours
so like fashion that views beautiful
till it not violence the culture in fashion//

No passing season is the same, no mind should remain the same.

Excellent bro.

Annie said...

Isn't it bittersweet to see all the couples enjoying each other while sitting alone?

Jeevan said...

Priya – true, thanks priya.

Alok – Thank you buddy :)

Keshi – welcomed, thank u dear.

GP – Thanks so much bro.

Annie – may be, but I didn’t felt like. Thank you.

krystyna said...

Jeevan, thank you so much for this brilliant poem!

flyingstars said...

This is simply fantastic Jeevan, I think both your poems are just excellent & this one you have crafted the atmosphere so well, I'm just out of words...you have captured the real emotions and our thoughts and the society so excellently & the blending of the words is brilliant...I think this is one of your finest poems...keep up your good work!

Jeevan said...

Krystyna – Thanks a lot dear :)

Kalyan – That was more encouraging friend, Thanks so much for your support at each post, and glad to have you always :) Enjoy the Holi Kalyan.