Thursday, March 13, 2008

Seasonal change

Clouds everywhere clouds
but where the rain to shower...?
without wetting earth somehow
wind to pull here... but where u were?

Birds twitter to fly branch to branch
for me smile bearing seeing it,
pieces of drops some times, to touch and go views
the hopeful weather of low-pressure.

Shining silvery cloud, eyes desire for rain
in opened sky, to remind burden as the kite to fall
in firing time, drizzle to come and blow
even season changes, to outstand the season rain.

Original verse (below)
Kaalamattram

7 comments:

priya said...

Original verse is always the best Jeevan. Wonderful poem about seasons.

Azer Mantessa said...

nice ... artistic ... i feel it :-)

Annie Wicking and Loman Austen said...

What lovely words...

Best wishes, my dear friend.

Annie

Alok said...

loved it as usual ... hope could read the original verses :)

Alok

Jeevan said...

Priya – Thank you, have a wonderful weekend.

Azer – Thank you :)

Annie wicking – Wish you the same dear :) thanks.

Alok – glad if you could do buddy, thank you :)

Shiva said...

Tamil poem is very beutiful Jeevan

Cheers
-Shiva

krystyna said...

Thank you Jeevan for these two werses of your great poem.
Original verse looks very nice, I think that writing in your language is very difficult?