Saturday, May 10, 2008

My mum

Who is behind my every action
and I reflect because of her help,
indeed she knows what I need
and every deed that’s completed
I get freedom in her struggle
in the hiding trouble.

Her courage lifts me higher
if not a single day I will be down;
every side I see around, if not she
I would be left in fear
in her given face I face the world
if not I am dwell loss.

She is divine whose relation is undivided
and where ever I go she is behind
like more than a shadow when I shine.
I give her only the rest at night
and little time in noon, other than
quite her thoughts about me.

Between the earth and universe
I could never guess anyone than her
to be living beyond her strength
and distress to suffering for her son.
I love you mom, I am lost strength
if I see u in fear and tear. Hugsss :)

My Very Happy Mother Day Wishes to all.


Vishesh said...


Alok said...

this is beautifully written Jeevan .. and very heartfelt ...


krystyna said...

Hi Jeevan!
Your poem is absolutely the most beautiful gift- gratitude to your lovely mom.
Your mom is happy and proud of you!

Happy Mother's Day to your Mom!

Sameera Ansari said...

That was so touching!Did you recite this to your Mom yet? :)

Happy Mother's Day to both of you!

Priya said...

That is indeed a beautiful poem for your mom. You both have a wonderful day!!

Meghna said...

You are a lucky son and ur Mom is a special one too...Happy Mothers Day :)

tulipspeaks said...

My Mother's Day wishes to your mom!



Raghavan alias Saravanan M said...

//like more than a shadow when I shine.//

Excellent Line Jeevan. Mother is an uncomparable entity in the world and every mother is unique in her own motherliness..

Thanks for the poem and Happy Mother's day to all moms in the world!!

Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan said...

Dear Jeevan,
The BEST TRIBUTE.Your mother deserves such high praise.My heartfelt wishes to her.
karthik amma

§ωατι §ετhι said...

This is so very beautiful n sincere!! :)
Your mom must be really proud of you Jeevan! God bless you n your mom!! :D
Take care!

Jeevan said...

Vishesh - :)

Alok – Thanks bro :)

Krystyna – Thanks so much dear, hope u have a pleasant mothers day :) Hugsss

Sameera – Thank you sameera :) she never knows about this day, but I remain her Sunday.

Priya – Thanks so much, it was wonderful priya.

Meghna – Thank you dear, what u did for your mom on M’day? :)

Ammu – Thank you.

Raghavan – Thanks buddy, and very true what u said. Happy mothers day, all days we have to be celebrate :)

Ponniyinselvan – Thank you ma, and I wish you too :)

Swati – Thank you swati, it was nice having you here. Hope u have a peace moments :)

Resonator said...

so beautifully written...lovely..

happy blogging

ghost particle said...

extremely beautiful and yet heartbreaking. you are special bro, and your mother is an angel. Happy Mothers day to her.

Keshi said...


HUGZ to ur beautiful Amma from Keshi!


Jeeves said...

Very nicely said.....:)

Casperbaba said...

this word is one of the most powerfull word... may b more than the word 'god'...
u have rendered me speechless with this piece... its an honor to have read you.

Jeevan said...

Resonator – Thank you prema :)

GP – Thanks so much bro :)

Keshi – Thanks dear, it was too nice. Hugs

Jeeves – Thank you :)

Casperbaba - welcome here and was nice having you :) Thanks for the beautiful comments.

Anonymous said...

Nice visiting your blog after a long time. This is a wonderful dedication to our mothers & has really captured my heart...the words are so beautiful & so true...Your mom will really be proud of you...stay well!