Thursday, November 20, 2008

Bird watching


Picture of a Hawk on our compound wall.

Where have u been sounding
I listen, it’s pleasing.
The cut down trees, even after
you resounding from leftover leaves
and branches early morning

Your little tones tune to music
the cold dawn to leave
the sun to give sense in gleam
the clouds form like foam
in the light blue sky

More than two different noises
without annoying anybody;
the constructions to enclose quicker
than before, the little birds are
trying to flap wings in shrinking space

The season to arrive
in wish to listen more twitters;
the cranes to rise from terrace
brings out in sight of
bird watching habit.

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11 comments:

vishesh said...

:) there are hawks in chennai? And they actually come down?

Priya said...

That is an awesome shot Jeevan. Good work.

Ponniyinselvan said...

M.N. Nambiyar is a true gentleman. I too share your views.
anbilum anbana
karthik+ amma

Ramyah said...

Nice picture and a very interesting post. tc

Raghavan alias Saravanan M said...

Good one Jeevan.

I just got a feel after reading the term and translating it as it gives 'paravai paarthal' Vs 'nilaa paarthal'!! engeayo paditha nyabagam!

Raghavan alias Saravanan M said...

//More than two different noises
without annoying anybody;//

awesome! :)

Priya said...

You have an award in my blog.

krystyna said...

You've done a great job, Jeevan; great poem and great picture!

And thanks for link. It is the best post about true friendship, and first of all he wrote true words about you!

Miladysa said...

He looks as though he is waiting for you to take his photograph :D

I really enjoyed your poem.

"the constructions to enclose quicker
than before, the little birds are
trying to flap wings in shrinking space"

Brought a tear to my eye. Thank you for speaking up for them.

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Lovely verse dear with a beautiful pic to go :)

Jeevan said...

Vishesh –I think they are, and may be it could be the reason because we at southern of Chennai. I have seen two times the hawks within our flat premises.
Priya – Thank you and for the award :)

Ponniyinselvan – I truly agree.

Ramyah – Thank you

Raghav – Thanks much!

Krystyna – It’s great to get great comment from you dear. He is a wonderful friend, and I must wish to known to practice this friendship with him :)

Miladysa – Thank you for coming here again, and hope we get to share here often. Am glad I could think about them :)

Sameera – Thanks so much dear :)