Thursday, September 10, 2009

My sweetheart rose

My sweetheart rose
Though there were many beauties
none were like her beautiful
beautifully, with young petals;
and since my eyes saw her
it deny to close lids

Savor sweet those tender lips
soft and unharmed rose cheeks
she smiles innocently, opening her lips;
and pretty in pink wear
she caught up my eyes in cold weather

For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.

I can’t be here as well as there these days, since I caught up with cold and fever from last Saturday. Doing good only today, I will be at regular soon… taking care all! :)

13 comments:

Devika said...

hmmmmm...a young boy writing about rose..something fishy here :))

nice poem and a beautiful photo, Jeevan :)

takecare...i will see you again by month-end may be, am going home :)

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

I meant writing so romantically about rose :)

devika

Anya said...

Take care Jeevan
take the rest you need,
I hope you are feeling better soon:)

Wonderful rose and a BEAUTIFUL poem
:)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.


----------------- how sweet it was dear. i loved reading it. n yes d pic is beautiful too.


get well soon :)

Kavi said...

Take care Jeevan. Hope you feel better ! soon

geetha said...

Take care.. get well soon :)

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Whats cooking my friend? Romance and rose? All in very lucid descriptions......! :)

Hope you are doing well, now!

exposemaximum said...

oh it is so sweet and romantic :)

venus66 said...

Lovely rose. Wonderful poem.Hope you are much better now. Take care.

:: flyingstars :: said...

Rose is everyone's sweetheart and one special one from us for you to get well soon....lovely photo & the words...Take care of your health & Stay well mate!

Mythily said...

Good poem... Different one jeevan...

Babli said...

You have taken lovely shot of the beautiful pink rose. I appreciate for the wonderful poem. I liked it very much.

Sujata said...

Wonderful post....

Hope you feel better soon.