Thursday, September 10, 2009

My sweetheart rose

My sweetheart rose
Though there were many beauties
none were like her beautiful
beautifully, with young petals;
and since my eyes saw her
it deny to close lids

Savor sweet those tender lips
soft and unharmed rose cheeks
she smiles innocently, opening her lips;
and pretty in pink wear
she caught up my eyes in cold weather

For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.

I can’t be here as well as there these days, since I caught up with cold and fever from last Saturday. Doing good only today, I will be at regular soon… taking care all! :)

13 comments:

Devika said...

hmmmmm...a young boy writing about rose..something fishy here :))

nice poem and a beautiful photo, Jeevan :)

takecare...i will see you again by month-end may be, am going home :)

wishes,
devika

Devika said...

I meant writing so romantically about rose :)

devika

Anya said...

Take care Jeevan
take the rest you need,
I hope you are feeling better soon:)

Wonderful rose and a BEAUTIFUL poem
:)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.


----------------- how sweet it was dear. i loved reading it. n yes d pic is beautiful too.


get well soon :)

Kavi said...

Take care Jeevan. Hope you feel better ! soon

geetha said...

Take care.. get well soon :)

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Whats cooking my friend? Romance and rose? All in very lucid descriptions......! :)

Hope you are doing well, now!

Anonymous said...

oh it is so sweet and romantic :)

venus66 said...

Lovely rose. Wonderful poem.Hope you are much better now. Take care.

Anonymous said...

Rose is everyone's sweetheart and one special one from us for you to get well soon....lovely photo & the words...Take care of your health & Stay well mate!

Mythily said...

Good poem... Different one jeevan...

Babli said...

You have taken lovely shot of the beautiful pink rose. I appreciate for the wonderful poem. I liked it very much.

Sujata said...

Wonderful post....

Hope you feel better soon.