Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Unusual


The earth spins
at supersonic speed
leaving stars to blink
at great velocity,
the days and nights
flash at immense speed
leaving eyes to faint
headaches to core
unwind to breathe
but desire to live
while struggle to see
only darkness at night.

8 comments:

Ash said...

Beautiful as usual!

kalaiselvisblog said...

nice post buddy...

ashok said...

good to see u try contemporary poetry...

Ponniyinselvan said...

darkness at night //
darkness at day/
darkness for ever
to me after karthik left me.
with no desire to live
karthik amma

Babli said...

Jeevan you write very beautiful poem as well as articles. In my opinion you should publish a book. Absolutely brilliant poem.
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Kalyan said...

lovely words...nicely crafted lines!

Eden said...

Nice poem!

Jyoti Mishra said...

Good one !!