Saturday, March 17, 2012

A girl on never ending call

The distance were not so far
but between the least disturbance
I saw her caressing her open hair
and another hand hold close to her ear
helps listening to someone
to whom she whisper through her cell phone.

The always inspiring wind
went ahead like never to unwind
to stop her tress floating in air
that prevent giving clear picture of her aspect
stressed to various gestures
respond to the never hold out cell phone.

The opportunity seems not so favor
leaving her not so longer on terrace
for me to admire the beauty from courtyard
aside the evening breeze and setting of sun gleam
the girl’s sight is an additional enhance,
who was in love already with her cell phone. :D

Footnote:

Thought of a girl whom I checked lately on an open terrace... came to mind after reading a romantic poem from my friend Dawn... inspired to write it down.

Updated the Congenial song (check sidebar on right) with Azhaipaya (will u call) from Tamil movie Kadhalil Sodhapuvadhu Yeppadi. One of my recent fav, to go well with this post.

13 comments:

ashok said...

good to see u try romantic poetry...keep it up

Rahul Bhatia said...

This was pretty romantic!

LadyFi said...

So romantic!

venus66 said...

Nice. Something different from your usual write.

Kalyan said...

hmmm...spring has fully engulfed your heart it seems...lovely words and the poem indeed!

Jyoti Mishra said...

that was an awesome poem :)
very romantic indeed :D

Hema Prabha Krishnan said...

its so nice

Anya said...

New blogstyle Jeevan
I like it :-)

hugs from us all
Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<

Krishna said...

nice & romantic

thanks for visiting my blog

George said...

You've created a very romantic and beautiful word picture with your description of the girl on her phone.

Jeevan said...

Thanks a lot for your appreciation and sharing your thought on poem! It's encourage to write more on this series of love and romance... let see what come across. :)

eden said...

A beautiful romantic poem..
Thank you for sharing

Eden said...

You always write good poems, Jeevan..

Have a great day always.