Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Kiss at sunset

Image: Google
The sun set down
leaving fire on the lips
that burn to ashes by kiss.

The gentle wind caress
while the lips share ashore,
hold to passion and love.

The salt seawater
turns sweeter ever
by the spilt of mouth water.

The moisture wind
fought the warm breath;
forever to embrace in cold.


A fun and fantasy on kiss...Inspired by a photo I really miss to save as from internet which is behind the write up.


George said...

This is a marvelous poem inspired by a beautiful photo.

TexWisGirl said...

i love the 'leaving fire on the lips'. :)

Linda said...

Very nice.

Betsy Adams said...

Terrific poem, Jeevan... Reminded me of George and my honeymoon cruise to the South Caribbean. We saw lots and lots of gorgeous sunsets on that trip. SO romantic....

Great photo also.

Rajesh said...


Eden said...

Nice poem, Jeevan!

Anonymous said...

Very sweet!

Simran said...

Beautiful carved image with your poetry! as always... Loved the read :)

ashok said...

nice Jeevan