Monday, November 26, 2012

A little romance

She comes in handy
when I yearn for an embrace
bind like a wind
blowing away the gap between.

The moisture air
become warm in our breath
her whisper voice
says the love to me, silently.

The gazing eyes
behold her mysterious world
trying hard to discover
a lonely planet on iris universe.

She smiles so sweet
holding mischievous at corner
trying to seduce me
against my enormous desire.

It feels so soothing
when she brushes the hair
the stimulated nerves
entice me to dream wild.

Very close to her lips
inspire me to kiss
trying hard to not imprint
but impossible after getting tempt.

11 comments:

ladyfi said...

We all need a little romance in our lives!

George said...

Thanks for sharing your romantic poem with us.

TexWisGirl said...

'entice me to dream wild'.

:)

Betsy Adams said...

Great romantic poem, Jeevan... You are a good writer.
Hugs,
Betsy

Ramya Ranganathan said...

The cutest way of expressing love!!
Lovely lines Jeevan :)

Ponniyinselvan said...

No,no,this is going beyond the limit. There is a limit to everything. You must post the photo of the sweet heart that stolen your heart.At least , personally to me.
karthik+amma

Srinivas said...

Wow... woo hoo hoo! I absolutely loved the poem, Jeevan. Not only was it honest but I really liked the originality of expression.

For example, the following couplet:

"trying hard to discover
a lonely planet on iris universe."

And these lines:

"trying to seduce me
against my enormous desire[...]"

"[...] the stimulated nerves
entice me to dream wild."

I thoroughly enjoyed it :). Keep writing!


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eden said...

Nice poem, Jeevan. Thank you for sharing.

ashok said...

Jeevan..join www.poetry.com and post your poems there

The Squishy Monster said...

I undoubtedly eat well but I'm definitely starved of romance---lovely sentiments here =)

Devilish Angel said...

So romantic...