Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Morning hours

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Time to wake up; 
the rooster cries early morning
sun-rays rise up
before awake from deep slumber.

Array of rays
illuminates half of the sphere
down from the earth
sun sparkle like a diamond.

Each season instinct
delay in time or prior sunrise
the laziness remains
identical throughout the year.

Sweating or shivering
dismiss anything try to arouse;
sticking to the bed
dreaming ideally under the sun.

Like a dewdrop
life remains stunning under sun;
a lovely dream
passes through a silent ringtone.

13 comments:

Destination Infinity said...

"A lovely dream passes through a silent ringtone" - Brilliant words.

Destination Infinity

RGB said...

Wow...you posted this at 12:12 AM? Time when I'm in deep slumber :) Thanks for stopping by at my blog.

Devilish Angel said...

Well written...

TexWisGirl said...

you made me want to go back to sleep. :)

eden said...

Nice one.

Optimistic Existentialist said...

So wonderfully written! You are very talented Jeevan.

Rajesh said...

Great stuff.

Meoww said...

My fav line is the "Each season instinct
delay in time or prior sunrise
the laziness remains
identical throughout the year."

Very True! :D Lovely!

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Beautiful lines..... straight from the heart! Keep writing, my friend!

Ponniyinselvan said...

what lovely dream? ITS A FANTASTIC EXPERIENCE TO LIE DOWN LAZILY AT HALF SLEEP.
KARTHIK+AMMA

ladyfi said...

What a lovely poem!

Vijila sk said...

Inspired by your writings...very nice....Turn for each phrase is lovable to read...Go ahead...

Indrani Ghose said...

Well written piece.