Monday, December 03, 2012

Observation


Light enters through a hollow
shadow ballet to motion of leaves;
observation might hold trouble
following the fall of sunlight.

A solo rays enters the room
illuminates hidden particles to aglow;
a radar might lose signal
tracing the light swallowed by shadow.

The winter sun brings home beam
however brighter it glows or glides;
the indirect ray radiates warmth
reflected through a mirror of Wagon R. 

17 comments:

Devilish Angel said...

Beautiful...

deeps said...

thats a warm one in the beginning of Dec...

Indrani Ghose said...

nicely written

TexWisGirl said...

'tracing the light swallowed by shadow'. loved that line. :)

Pattu Raj said...

Lovely! Reflecting from the car..

George said...

This is a beautiful poem, and I really like the photo as well.

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Brilliant!

Krishna said...

beautifully poem, well written

thanks

Rahul Bhatia said...

Nice one!

ladyfi said...

Just beautiful!

eden said...

Nice poem!

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

left me with the want for more. lovely Jeevan.

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Wow, this was lovely :)

Irfanuddin said...

very well penned thoughts with equally good foto here :)

Meoww said...

:) Sweet!

Jeevan said...

Thanks everyone for the sweet comments :)

Ponniyinselvan said...

wonderful.captivating.
karthik+amma