Monday, October 07, 2013

Whisper of love


I blow away her curls
crawling around her ear’s
to whisper my love.

Holding her face in palms
 kissed her forehead
for she embarrassed in red.

Eyes grasped each other
digging deep in desire, that
who quench (love) thirst first.

Lips ready to unfold, to say
something whispered so far
or plainly imprint love. 

18 comments:

Optimistic Existentialist said...

What a beautiful and romantic poem Jeevan. I truly love it.

Pooja Mittal said...

Ur a fantastic writer and poet...
Beautiful words.. :)
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TexWisGirl said...

lovely.

Twilight Man said...

You are in love!

Rajesh said...

Very romantic, took me to a different world.

Indrani said...

Nice lines Jeevan.

ladyfi said...

So romantic and poetic!

Elsie said...

I love this, Jeevan! You did a wonderful job capturing love.

Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan said...

Hm,GREAT.

deeps said...

Ahhhh
That’s some sensual imagination gone into it

Aditi said...

Very romantic....loved it!!

Arti said...

Very intense, touching the heart. Truly a beautiful expression of love. Loved it very much! :)

Sandhya said...

Words fullll of love! You seem to be a good poet!

Betsy Adams said...

Love your romantic poem, Jeevan. You have a talent for writing poetry. Thanks!
Hugs,
Betsy

George said...

Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem with us.

Fiza Dawn said...

Wow! nice to see the romance coming through in words :) beautiful poem Jeevan :)

Cheers
Dawn

Kalyan Panja said...

beautiful words...nice lines!

Betty Manousos said...

so lovely!

you have a way with words.

have a blessed sunday~