Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Inspecting mirror

Indicate Mirror

Come across road, sights in mirror
progressive path, visible before

Decision depend to take steps before
within mirror noticing behind

Look at back, before to go further
see those behind you, life or thing
think before your turn

Learning from the past, experience
comes by; playing in future the rest,
could even happen to wonder at best.
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous1:30 am

    WoW....lovely words along with a lovely lovely pic....you have depicted it beautifully...the words are so meaningful, we can all relate to it...I simply loved those last three lines....so true & meaningful along with the photo...have a wonderful time!

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  2. Vinesh10:29 am

    wow buddy jeevan!
    punch dialogue - the quote in the pic :-)

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  3. Anonymous11:55 am

    Excellent. I really enjoyed it.

    Radha

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  4. Keshi9:11 pm

    wow this is just brilliant Jeevan! Wut a comparison! LOVED IT.

    Keshi.

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  5. Jeevan10:59 pm

    Kalyan – Thanks so much buddy :) have a wonderful time too.

    Vinesh – Thank you buddy :)

    Radha – Thanks for your visit and comment :)

    Keshi – Thanks dear!

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  6. G U R U11:25 am

    *clap* *clap* *clap* :)

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  7. krystyna6:52 pm

    Jeevan,
    you write at easse, with beautiful naturalness.

    Take care!

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  8. Alok1:06 am

    thought provoking ...

    Well done


    Alok

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  9. Jeevan12:53 am

    Guru – Thank you :)

    Krystyna – Thanks krish.

    Alok – Thank you buddy :)

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