before freezing; it takes rest as wearing
simplicity…. antiquity hiding the eyes
where compassion gone, banding its eyes.
Understand relations stand in distance watching
some mysterious hearts lives in some intend
when a distress visits, worries comes admit
uninterested relation this or that it seeks.
Unable to hide the truth
it came here and fell
to wake up and answer
though the world hesitates.
Eyes stain in imagination
what happened is true,
to remember wetness in heart
I glance to forget but my intend not conceal
The original in Tamil:
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Nice one. When did you write this? You seem to be having a great talent. Why can't you pursue your skills in writing poems like this. By the way your font alignment has still not been corrected. Did you have a look at it?
ReplyDeleteHey Jeevan, good to see that you are keeping on writing poetry! Keep writing more. Thanks for the Engish translation. Eventhough I can read Tamil, it will take time to read and understand. :-)
ReplyDeleteHello, Jeeven,
ReplyDeletegood poem, thank you.
have a good day
The lettering is art, as is the poem, Jeevan.
ReplyDeleteu r too good at this Jeevan!
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Balaji – Thank you so much friend, its encouraging your words. I don’t know what u were telling, should check the front or the sentence. I can’t find any different here.
ReplyDeleteJo – Thanks a lot buddy, I could understand and glad u could read by poems. Sure I will try presenting more :)
David – Thank you!
Annie – glad you are doing well after the disaster, hope the situation return to peace. Thanks annie, take care :)
Keshi – Thanks dear :)
Beautiful words...wonderfully written!
ReplyDeleteoh jeevan,
ReplyDeletei never guessed that a genius poet is lurking in u. very good, toughing, moving poem.shares my feelings.
much emotional,
karthik amma