Thursday, May 01, 2008

Well-known

Solitarily sitting on hanger
I see on every rainy, sunny
and all single day’s I gaze
the staying unchanged

In clouded sky they symbolizes
easily available to sight, but
it’s the same or different,
very difficult to identify exactly
because all are identical color

A large group of visitors
the most special guest on observance
representing forebears; for more
there speech signs fortunate
to think befall something unforeseen

The only disturbing fellows, doing mess
to disrespect our honorable leaders
to make visibly horrible; for more
this familiar bird looked everywhere
across continents they live freely
and to call them easily tighten your throat
now shout kaa kaa... kaa kaa...

hehe...a funny poem

11 comments:

  1. indeed fun but not a funny poem .. light and hardhitting at the same time ... with an inherent message ... good work


    Alok

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  2. the city bird of chennai :)

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  3. Anonymous5:10 am

    jeevz, it is not a funny poem. so much deeper than that..

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  4. An observation of what you see in your day today life.

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  5. aww u r such a fine writer with alot of insight and respect for ur daily observations.

    Keshi.

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  6. That was cute but wise at the same time! :)

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  7. nice message...politicians and life...:D

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  8. Alok – Thanks so much buddy :)

    Vishesh - :)

    Thooya – Thanks dear :)

    Priya – Thank you priya...

    Keshi – Thanks dear...

    Sameera – Welcome here sameera:)
    nice having you and thank you.

    GP – Thanks bro :)

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  9. good.write more,jeevan.

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  10. Thank you Jeevan!

    :)

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