Picture of a Hawk on our compound wall.
Where have u been sounding
I listen, it’s pleasing.
The cut down trees, even after
you resounding from leftover leaves
and branches early morning
Your little tones tune to music
the cold dawn to leave
the sun to give sense in gleam
the clouds form like foam
in the light blue sky
More than two different noises
without annoying anybody;
the constructions to enclose quicker
than before, the little birds are
trying to flap wings in shrinking space
The season to arrive
in wish to listen more twitters;
the cranes to rise from terrace
brings out in sight of
bird watching habit.
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:) there are hawks in chennai? And they actually come down?
ReplyDeleteThat is an awesome shot Jeevan. Good work.
ReplyDeleteM.N. Nambiyar is a true gentleman. I too share your views.
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karthik+ amma
Nice picture and a very interesting post. tc
ReplyDeleteGood one Jeevan.
ReplyDeleteI just got a feel after reading the term and translating it as it gives 'paravai paarthal' Vs 'nilaa paarthal'!! engeayo paditha nyabagam!
//More than two different noises
ReplyDeletewithout annoying anybody;//
awesome! :)
You have an award in my blog.
ReplyDeleteYou've done a great job, Jeevan; great poem and great picture!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for link. It is the best post about true friendship, and first of all he wrote true words about you!
He looks as though he is waiting for you to take his photograph :D
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem.
"the constructions to enclose quicker
than before, the little birds are
trying to flap wings in shrinking space"
Brought a tear to my eye. Thank you for speaking up for them.
Lovely verse dear with a beautiful pic to go :)
ReplyDeleteVishesh –I think they are, and may be it could be the reason because we at southern of Chennai. I have seen two times the hawks within our flat premises.
ReplyDeletePriya – Thank you and for the award :)
Ponniyinselvan – I truly agree.
Ramyah – Thank you
Raghav – Thanks much!
Krystyna – It’s great to get great comment from you dear. He is a wonderful friend, and I must wish to known to practice this friendship with him :)
Miladysa – Thank you for coming here again, and hope we get to share here often. Am glad I could think about them :)
Sameera – Thanks so much dear :)