Red, sense me the struggle
and how inseparable we are;
it remind my teachers remark
and the pains of wounded;
and those sleepless nights
that reflect in eyes;
and mosquitoes bite
like those drunkards
suck kin blood;
light and heat produce energy
barley without scar;
the pretty girl’s tee
and evening crimson – sun;
the heart pumps blood
the peace and freedom come
after drops of blood
which is red!
and how inseparable we are;
it remind my teachers remark
and the pains of wounded;
and those sleepless nights
that reflect in eyes;
and mosquitoes bite
like those drunkards
suck kin blood;
light and heat produce energy
barley without scar;
the pretty girl’s tee
and evening crimson – sun;
the heart pumps blood
the peace and freedom come
after drops of blood
which is red!
This idea was copied from annie’s red poem, where the inspiration raised from Jan Mader’s Kick your senses into gear... This is not arranged, just by thoughts flow. If you’re interested go ahead to share your sense on Red.
The current song from Red, one of my favorite!
Very creative Jeevan. Lovely picture shot.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is amazing, Jeevan. I'm so happy to have connected with creative people like you.
ReplyDeleteLike Annie's poem, yours was powerful too. Isn't it amazing what we write when we let our minds go?
Please come back often...I'll come visit you too! Jan
very nice jeevan.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Jeevan... It's beautiful (((Hugs)))
ReplyDeleteJeeven..love the picture and the words.very creative.
ReplyDeleteVery nice one :)
ReplyDeleteThis was a pleasant surprise, dear...
ReplyDeleteNot read much of your verse, good it is :)
love,
devika
Perfect both. The flower and the poem :)
ReplyDeletei like this Jeevan ... read ur poem after a long time ...
ReplyDeleteAlok
Nice to read your poetry Jeevan.
ReplyDeleteThe mosquitoe imagery was inspired :D
Imagery in your poem is wonderful..Im not so sure red meant so many things to me..do keep writing
ReplyDeleteHey thank you for visiting my blog :D
ReplyDeleteRed is an auspicious colour during our Chinese New Year.
loved the pic!!
ReplyDeletehappy blogging