Thursday, March 19, 2009

In love

In Love
My hands rust
without touching her palm
My eyes struggle
without seeing her face
My world conclude
within her embrace

I wake and sleep
by her eyesight
I struggle to leave
when she’s stressed
I love her, not alone
because she’s my life

Preserve and care
everyone to give, unlike her
People come and go
but she’s the only hope
Praise whatever I do
to never say shatter words.
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9 comments:

  1. Jeeves4:59 am

    Lovely dear

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  2. Preetilata【ツ】8:34 am

    it is just beautiful jeevan. it touched me. :)

    and the first stanza of ur poem is marvelous.

    thanks for ur visit jeevan. i loved ur blog. wud definitely visit agn :)

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  3. Priya9:53 am

    Very well written.

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  4. Annie Wicking11:35 am

    Wonderful, Jeevan, your words have touch my heart, my dear friend.

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  5. Devika Jyothi8:56 pm

    Very nice poem, Jeevan :)

    so you are in love with a girl? I am sure she will never leave you :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  6. Shionge12:50 am

    Gosh, so romantic :)

    Thank you for visiting my blog and your well wishes :D

    Have a nice weekend.

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  7. Viji2:52 am

    Hey Jeevan,

    Lovely poem:-).

    Tnx for visiting my blog!

    Happy Weekend!

    Cheers...VIji

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  8. Jeevan8:20 am

    Thanks so much dear friends and for your sweet comments :)

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  9. Alok7:58 pm

    very nice :)


    Alok

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