Wednesday, April 01, 2009
Darkness
In darkness, world shines for tomorrow
In darkness, we save lights for future
In darkness, glow warm insects
In darkness, shades are indifference
In darkness, illusions are fear
In darkness, our shadows invisible
In darkness, I remind scare about terrace
In darkness, we seek someone’s aid
In darkness, lies the truth
In darkness, everyone is blind
In darkness, hides law and order
In darkness, born our lives
In darkness, tear and smile are same
In darkness, skin tones are same
In darkness, lighthouse direct ships
In darkness, neighbors get-together in past
In darkness, candle lights are precious
In darkness, we afraid of thunder flash to stole vision
In darkness, world dormant
In darkness, something exists and exits.
I wrote this in inspire of Earth Hour post across blog world.
Very true.
ReplyDeletein darkness,
ReplyDeletethe light shines the brightest!
The Earth Hour seems to have caught people's imagination !!
ReplyDeleteWell written.
Very nice:) Really nice of you to have such socially relevent post.
ReplyDeleteVery much True dear...I really like your thoughts :)
ReplyDeleteKeep rocking
Cheers
"something exists and exits"
ReplyDeleteBrilliant work, Jeevan!
WOW u wrote that so beautifully Jeevan! I loved it.
ReplyDelete**In darkness, lies the truth
Spot on!
And in darkness, we see LIGHT.
:)
Keshi.
Good one, Jeevan
ReplyDeletean extensive coverage :)
I liked the earlier ones too, caught in a "Wild Dream? :))
On that German shepherd -- i read in an other blog....
btw, i tried so many times in between..your blog wasn't downloading...do not know why :)
love,
devika
nice one, jeevan..
ReplyDeletewishes..
brilliant lines nanba, well done :)
ReplyDeletewowww,,, too good and so very true :)
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone, u r support and encourage keeps me active on thoughts and to express.
ReplyDeletehi jeevan,
ReplyDeletewonderful poem,dear.the line i liked the most is ,'in darkness skin tones are the same'.how true!u got a creative mind.keep writing...
I am glad that you dedicated this poem to "earth hour." Well-composed.
ReplyDeleteSo well written, Jeevan!
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