Thursday, September 10, 2009

My sweetheart rose

My sweetheart rose
Though there were many beauties
none were like her beautiful
beautifully, with young petals;
and since my eyes saw her
it deny to close lids

Savor sweet those tender lips
soft and unharmed rose cheeks
she smiles innocently, opening her lips;
and pretty in pink wear
she caught up my eyes in cold weather

For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.

I can’t be here as well as there these days, since I caught up with cold and fever from last Saturday. Doing good only today, I will be at regular soon… taking care all! :)

13 comments:

  1. hmmmmm...a young boy writing about rose..something fishy here :))

    nice poem and a beautiful photo, Jeevan :)

    takecare...i will see you again by month-end may be, am going home :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. I meant writing so romantically about rose :)

    devika

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  3. Take care Jeevan
    take the rest you need,
    I hope you are feeling better soon:)

    Wonderful rose and a BEAUTIFUL poem
    :)

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  4. For women eyelids are beautiful
    for flower petals are beautiful
    eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
    whatever else flowers are beautiful
    whereas closed or opened its petals.


    ----------------- how sweet it was dear. i loved reading it. n yes d pic is beautiful too.


    get well soon :)

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  5. Take care Jeevan. Hope you feel better ! soon

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  6. Take care.. get well soon :)

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  7. Whats cooking my friend? Romance and rose? All in very lucid descriptions......! :)

    Hope you are doing well, now!

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  8. Anonymous9:20 pm

    oh it is so sweet and romantic :)

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  9. Lovely rose. Wonderful poem.Hope you are much better now. Take care.

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  10. Anonymous1:41 am

    Rose is everyone's sweetheart and one special one from us for you to get well soon....lovely photo & the words...Take care of your health & Stay well mate!

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  11. Good poem... Different one jeevan...

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  12. You have taken lovely shot of the beautiful pink rose. I appreciate for the wonderful poem. I liked it very much.

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  13. Wonderful post....

    Hope you feel better soon.

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