Saturday, June 04, 2011

The lawn

Myna
While it dawn
the dewdrops widespread the lawn
the sun rises
down, to break the yawn

Fresh in the morning
the mind rejuvenates,
while the mild sunshine
back with hope rays

Lass and kids
kiss the droplets at feet
while hanging around
lowness at lawn

In spirit and pride
like a crowned queen of hills
in the little feet
march-past the little myna
- in the lawn
at

8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi5:09 am

    This poem had me smiling almost laughing in the end....not for the poem, but the child-like spirit of it, observing and saying as it is...nice photograph too Jeevan :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Devika Jyothi5:14 am

    yet, ever wonder how the birds feel within? that must be a different story altogether :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Anya11:58 am

    Its a fantastic poem Jeevan
    Love it .....

    :)

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  4. Urmi9:50 pm

    Very sweet picture of the bird. Beautiful and excellent poem written by you. One of your best post.
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  5. Rajesh1:05 am

    Beautiful poem.

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  6. Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan(1981-2005 )5:43 am

    dear jeevan,
    nice poem and nice photo.
    karthik amma

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  7. Jeevan3:58 am

    Thanks everyone for your appreciation. Devika, glad it made u laugh :)

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  8. Eden5:43 am

    Nice poem and beautiful photo.

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