The earth spins at supersonic speed leaving stars to blink at great velocity, the days and nights flash at immense speed leaving eyes to faint headaches to core unwind to breathe but desire to live while struggle to see only darkness at night.
Jeevan you write very beautiful poem as well as articles. In my opinion you should publish a book. Absolutely brilliant poem. You are welcome at my new post- http://amazing-shot.blogspot.com/
Beautiful as usual!
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ReplyDeletegood to see u try contemporary poetry...
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darkness for ever
to me after karthik left me.
with no desire to live
karthik amma
Jeevan you write very beautiful poem as well as articles. In my opinion you should publish a book. Absolutely brilliant poem.
ReplyDeleteYou are welcome at my new post-
http://amazing-shot.blogspot.com/
lovely words...nicely crafted lines!
ReplyDeleteNice poem!
ReplyDeleteGood one !!
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