Thursday, June 14, 2012

Embarrassing moment

She came leaving me at embarrass
in a sultry outfit, that ready to lose grip;
she let me feel and caress her body
showing her back prone to bed.

My fingers like a fern feather
moved on her back, tickling;
while for her to embarrass now
grabbing a pillow for grip.

She leant her legs probably
feeling butterflies fluttering inside;
while I drew along her spine
barely open to bare back.

She seemed insensible
as respond to my love and ecstatic;
an embarrassment felt allover
while I kissed at her rear neck.

Footnote: Just another fantasy in feel of love and desire ;)

15 comments:

  1. Anonymous3:49 am

    Very romantic and sensual.

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  2. You express your fantasies very beautifully.

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  3. Very romantic..... Made me tingle--thinking of my hubby!!!!
    Betsy

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  4. you are transforming into a mature writer now Jeevan...

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  5. beautiful poem

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  6. So romantic and sweet.

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  7. Jeevan
    whats this? Your blog is switching to another color !!!!any ??????????????some of your posts make me doubt that you are in love with somebody..hope this doubt comes true.
    karthik +amma

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  8. its tough to put out fantasies and romantic ideas in writing.. good one Jeevan!!

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  9. I agree with the others, this poem is so sweet and romantic.. :)

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  10. Hi, Jeevan,

    Have a great weekend!

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  11. just one word Wow n beautiful..
    sensuous n touching !!!!

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  12. filled with the fragrance of romance...

    Beautifully penned....:)

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  13. Anonymous8:29 pm

    Beautiful and romantic poem

    thanks for sharing

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  14. Thanks for those sweet comments ;) I never though i could come up with such romantic thoughts and feeling! Lol

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