Thursday, June 28, 2012

Heart gets hurt

Deep in heart I get hurt
The reckless words shatter
And cut pierce my veins
Leaving me at impatient call
When insane people talk
Insensible and extremely intolerable; 

Money is a matter
Cut slice the heart layers
No matter how well and deep u loved
A minute exchange of phrases
Cuts off the ever lasting relationship
You believed lifelong.

In someone’s system of love
The gratitude and attitude is nothing
Once the program is completed;
People whose interaction is almost gadget
Applies the same technique in relationship
Which Sign-offs immediately.
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11 comments:

  1. George6:36 am

    Your poem is sad, but beautiful. I think all of us have faced heartache at some time in our lives.

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  2. Simran7:12 am

    I loved the message you conveyed in this poetry. Each word and each action means a lot to build up a long lasting relationship... Words when used being thoughtless can break many of the hearts,believe and relations because everywhere there is someone admiring you...

    You expressed in a unique style using technical words...! Great!

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  3. Linda9:19 am

    A heartfelt and lovely poem.

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  4. Betsy Banks Adams12:29 pm

    Hi Jeevan, I'm so sorry about your heart-break. We've all experienced that in our lives I'm sure. I know how much it hurts...

    BUT---you'll make it out of this, and come back a better man and a happier man in the future...

    Hang in there.
    Betsy

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  5. Anonymous1:01 am

    Love and relationships can be painful.

    Hang in there!

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  6. eden4:57 am

    A sad and well written poem.

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  7. Lakshmi6:57 am

    It hurts..I can relate to it, but then everything gets healed over time..stay happy

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  8. Jyoti Mishra10:24 pm

    A minute exchange of phrases
    Cuts off...
    so true..sometimes words are too painful to endure..

    I loved the last verse.. superb
    in modern life..
    ppl have become too techno savvy that they've begun to take human relationships and emotions in the same way.. !!!

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  9. Kalyan3:41 am

    Can't agree more with your thoughts...striking poignant words!

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  10. venuss6612:46 am

    I can understand how hurting it is.Only time can heal. A very good write from you.

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  11. Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan(1981-2005 )8:19 pm

    jeevan,
    why?
    I have come across 100s of such betrayal.Felt like torn apart into 1000 pieces. Bleeding heart.
    console yourself.
    karthik+amma

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