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| Image courtesy: Google |
I just want to
blow the wind
I just want to
kiss the clouds
I just want to
signal the stars
I just want to
paint the moon
Using the colors
of rainbow;
I just want to draw
a rangoli
Using the dots of
stars;
I just want to write
a letter
Using the galaxy
to my eternal love;
I just want to
eliminate from the earth
To fetch the
golden opportunity of stars
The silver
jubilee of moon
Under the
limelight of yellow sun.
Footnote: Just nothing
to do last night while the power goes off… I penned this poem using the mobile phone,
inspired by sky gazing.
and even i want to touch that blue sky above my head.....
ReplyDeletebeautiful words Jeevan.
Nice verse:)
ReplyDeletePerfect! I love the image too!
ReplyDeleteit is wonderful. and longing.
ReplyDeleteHi, beautiful. Write more.
ReplyDelete''Using the dots of stars;
ReplyDeleteI just want to write a letter''
Me too wish the same :)
Cheers, You know, me too write all my poems in my mobile phone and save it as draft because when feelings and thoughts come at a moment and are expressed at the same time are shaped perfect!
This was a beautiful poem
Keep writing dear :)
You made good use of the power outage. I like your poem very much.
ReplyDeleteNice poem. Love it.
ReplyDeleteSimple words. But penned so beautifully :)
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for the kind words and wises :)
ReplyDeleteSimran – Thanks for sharing and glad u wish for... I truly agree with u on instant expression and it’s rewarding than recollecting and writing down later.
Have a nice week ahead :)
I like this very much. Well written.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful lines along with the photo!
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