Friday, September 14, 2012

Inner conflict


My heart kept swelling
to emotionally breakup anytime;
my heart gets scratched
repeatedly to eternal pain.

My eyes left wet
with no warmth to wipe out;
my throat get choked
with no light moment to pass.

My mind left puzzled
with no problem gets solved;
my consciousness gets collapse
in battle with constant grief.

PS - Image Courtesy: Google
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14 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:47 am

    As always a good correspondence between the picture and the words, Jeevan :)

    You have brought out "strife" with authenticity in words and image. Do take care :)

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  2. TexWisGirl9:47 am

    yes, internal 'strife' is a good way to describe the feeling you give.

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  3. Bob Bushell11:44 am

    I love the anguish and the poem, great stuff.

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  4. Linda5:24 pm

    Very nicely done.

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  5. eden3:24 am

    Sad one and well written.

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  6. Eden4:32 am

    Hi, Jeevan!

    Have a great weekend!

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  7. sm10:12 am

    beautiful poem

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  8. Krishna/കൃഷ്ണ10:55 pm

    Sad poem... Beautiful poem...

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  9. Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan(1981-2005 )5:11 am

    reading your lines just now with me Senthil says that all have their own sadness. of course its true.all are sailing in the same sad boat. its like the story which we read in our childhood that one blind man carrying a legless continues his journey guided by the legless.Now our state is like that.One saddest is consoling the other.
    Don't lose heart. Don't feel depressed. Though cursed we are let us keep going.
    karthik+amma

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  10. Simran8:31 am

    Its always a different experience reading you...
    Intense flow of feelings in your words.

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  11. Rakesh Vanamali9:38 pm

    Beautiful

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  12. Dawn9:41 pm

    Jeevan... it's good to express it out but then gain the courage back to fight that and am sure you are a strong man ... keep it up
    Cheers and Hugs
    Dawn

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  13. Devilish Angel1:08 am

    Hi Jeevan... nothing is constant...Even the problems,sad and grief...It will change...

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  14. Vetirmagal8:36 am

    Oh.. Jeevan, I could feel it, so many times. But it passed, and new hope and happiness, and again sorrow took over. It is a constant flow.

    Lovely expression.

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