I blow away her
curls
crawling around her ear’s
to whisper my love.
crawling around her ear’s
to whisper my love.
Holding her face in
palms
kissed her forehead
for she embarrassed in red.
kissed her forehead
for she embarrassed in red.
Eyes grasped each
other
digging deep in desire, that
who quench (love) thirst first.
digging deep in desire, that
who quench (love) thirst first.
Lips ready to unfold,
to say
something whispered so far
or plainly imprint love.
something whispered so far
or plainly imprint love.
What a beautiful and romantic poem Jeevan. I truly love it.
ReplyDeleteUr a fantastic writer and poet...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.. :)
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lovely.
ReplyDeleteYou are in love!
ReplyDeleteVery romantic, took me to a different world.
ReplyDeleteNice lines Jeevan.
ReplyDeleteSo romantic and poetic!
ReplyDeleteI love this, Jeevan! You did a wonderful job capturing love.
ReplyDeleteHm,GREAT.
ReplyDeleteAhhhh
ReplyDeleteThat’s some sensual imagination gone into it
Very romantic....loved it!!
ReplyDeleteVery intense, touching the heart. Truly a beautiful expression of love. Loved it very much! :)
ReplyDeleteWords fullll of love! You seem to be a good poet!
ReplyDeleteLove your romantic poem, Jeevan. You have a talent for writing poetry. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Betsy
Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem with us.
ReplyDeleteWow! nice to see the romance coming through in words :) beautiful poem Jeevan :)
ReplyDeleteCheers
Dawn
beautiful words...nice lines!
ReplyDeleteso lovely!
ReplyDeleteyou have a way with words.
have a blessed sunday~