Monday, December 22, 2014

Christmas Haiku

Neighbors Christmas Tree
Winter cold wraps me
while I dream snow home alone
deck my Christmas tree

There’s festive in air
bells ring loud to motion wind
stars shine unco bright.

Written for Christmas Special of Poetic Forms: Haiku (Week 7, A Repost of week 4)
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PS. The picture above show you one of my neighbors Christmas Tree (inside a construction office) and mine is under decor. Will post them soon
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21 comments:

  1. Uppal3:14 am

    The LINES EXPRESS THE FERVOUR OF THE CHRISTMAS SEASON SO WELL.THE DECORATED CHRISTMAS TREE LOOKS LOVELY!


    WISHING YOU AND YOUR NEAR AND DEAR ONES A HEALTHY AND JOYFUL FESTIVE SEASON!

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  2. Ramakrishnan4:27 am

    Merry Christmas to you and your family !

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  3. TexWisGirl7:06 am

    a joyous season wished to you.

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  4. Iremonger Lindsay JacoBus Quinlan Pickens11:46 am

    a wrap of snow around your home is very pure and innocent to think about.

    way to go.
    welcome.

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  5. laynie blecha11:58 am

    a good go,
    best wishes for your holiday.

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall10:19 pm

    a thumb up for your haiku sentiments.
    pretty Christmas tree.

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  7. mary bruce holmwood10:38 pm

    merry Christmas....
    super powerful haiku.

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  8. Anonymous10:51 pm

    excellent submission.

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  9. deeps11:42 pm

    Happy Christmas in advance...let the joy of Christmas hang on for a veeery long time

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  10. Destination Infinity3:59 am

    Nice deco, waiting to see yours :)

    Destination Infinity

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  11. Rajesh5:49 am

    Beautiful. Merry Christmas

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  12. Jyoti Mishra9:42 am

    Beautiful, Merry Christmas Jeevan !!

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  13. GreenComotion4:41 pm

    Very beautiful Haiku, Jeevan.
    Looking forward to seeing your tree also.
    Peace :)

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  14. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry7:50 am

    pure beauty in Christmas sense, well done.

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  15. Anonymous10:45 pm

    I smell Christmas,
    enjoy a good one.

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  16. Michelle Ivana Yunaska Theilfing Obama11:03 pm

    Merry Christmas,
    thanks for posting such a skillful haiku entry.

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  17. Anonymous2:22 am

    hope that you indeed enjoyed a good one.

    Happy New Year.

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  18. Eleaine Sarah Thomas Jobs Bush2:43 am

    have a good day.
    your haiku is powerfully written.

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  19. Anonymous10:24 am

    skillful write.

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  20. Anonymous12:54 pm

    very good imagery.
    I can sense the warmth in Christmas mood.

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  21. Anonymous6:35 pm

    exceptional imagery.

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