Thursday, February 21, 2008

Uncovered

My season of favored begins early
sending sea breeze after late morn
with so many excite the mind felt
as it pushes the tender winds
across my stretched window frame

From the long lost greener, is back
in reflecting the cool breeze even sun shines;
the fallen tubes of wind chimes resist
striking the pleasant jingling sounds
hangs, lack hands, to replace with new chime

After weeks of visiting, nothing unchanged
on my eventide ride in wheels, sighting
from children in streets with out stress
seems like defeating digital world,
playing on wagons passing streets, and
bloomed yellow flowers, either sides
indicating the uncover spring.

13 comments:

flyingstars said...

lovely words...have such a refreshing feeling in the lines...we could really feel the words....Wonderfully crafted!

priya said...

Good one Jeevan. Wind chimes are always beautiful and pleasant to hear.

Annie said...

How pleasant is this view of your world. In this poem you see the world uncover itself, show itself, through the window frame?

It was my pleasure to show you the oppossum in my blog today.

kuttyponnu said...

hi jeevan..hw r u ..its been a long time since i came here as i was out of blog for a period...

so u hv given a wonderful poem from ur point of view..tats nice..keep it up..

Keshi said...

WOW I cud feel Spring all over that one..lovely!

Keshi.

Ghost Particle said...

excellent observations nanba. the everyday life, the passing season.

Jeevan said...

Kalyan – Thank you buddy :) ya it’s refreshing in the winds.

Priya – Thank you. True, I should buy a new on soon.

Annie – that was very true annie, Thank you and glad you liked it :) the opossum closely looks like an ant hunter.

Kuttyponnu – Welcome here and it was nice having you here after longtime. I am doing fine, how are u? Thank you.

Keshi – Thanks dear. have a pleasant weekend and take care :)

GP – that’s sweet. Thank you bro :)

Alok said...

I agree with Siva .. excellent observation .. good to be reading you again


Alok

Manimala said...

Ah, the uncovered spring, this are moving lines.

Ponniyinselvan said...

HUMBLE wishes to a NOBLE poet

sweetest karthikeyan

Jeevan said...

Alok – Thank you buddy, I am so glad for your comment :)

Manimala – Thanks so much.

Ponniyinselvan - :) that was very sweet of you.

krystyna said...

Jeevan, I love your poem! You write as a mature writer. I cudn't believe that you are such young poet.

krystyna said...

Jeevan, I love your poem! You write as a mature writer. I cudn't believe that you are such young poet.