Thursday, March 19, 2009

In love

In Love
My hands rust
without touching her palm
My eyes struggle
without seeing her face
My world conclude
within her embrace

I wake and sleep
by her eyesight
I struggle to leave
when she’s stressed
I love her, not alone
because she’s my life

Preserve and care
everyone to give, unlike her
People come and go
but she’s the only hope
Praise whatever I do
to never say shatter words.


Jeeves said...

Lovely dear

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

it is just beautiful jeevan. it touched me. :)

and the first stanza of ur poem is marvelous.

thanks for ur visit jeevan. i loved ur blog. wud definitely visit agn :)

Priya said...

Very well written.

Annie Wicking said...

Wonderful, Jeevan, your words have touch my heart, my dear friend.

Devika said...

Very nice poem, Jeevan :)

so you are in love with a girl? I am sure she will never leave you :)


Shionge said...

Gosh, so romantic :)

Thank you for visiting my blog and your well wishes :D

Have a nice weekend.

Vijayalakshmi Natarajan said...

Hey Jeevan,

Lovely poem:-).

Tnx for visiting my blog!

Happy Weekend!


Jeevan said...

Thanks so much dear friends and for your sweet comments :)

Alok said...

very nice :)