Monday, February 13, 2006

Love Message

I read a poem in a News paper yesterday, with the model of that poem I have used some of my own word & lines in between and writen here.

Love is beautiful, love is sweet, love is wonder.
When I look at you, my heart was not with me.
I can’t describe how I feel, When our lips meet.
If my kiss was a raindrop I will send u clouds.
If my hug was a second I will send u hours.
If my smile was honey I will send u flowers
If love was a person I will send u me!
When ever I close my eyes I romance with u in my dream.
I gave u my heart the day we first met
I shall love u enternally till death do us apart.
Your love helped me to rediscover my self.
If u look into my eyes, you could see the happinest, because u r with me.
If you ask my rose plant, it will tell, how much I miss u.
If I could live in this world one more time, I like to have u by my side always, until the end of my days.




Happy Valentines Day

33 comments:

tulipspeaks said...

:( i dont want to talk about v-day la.. sad sad


=am000nie=

revatechnic said...

wow.. how beautiful...
my fav line is..

If my kiss was a raindrop I will send u clouds.
If love was a person I will send u me!


HAPPY VDAY!!!

Truly Yours said...

who is the lucky one

Prabu Karthik said...

kalakkal post:)

lil _kath said...

Hey Happy Valentine's Day yaar^_~ enjoy...

cheers,
-kathy-

Ferocious Killer Kat said...

jeevan:
very very nice!!!!!!!!!!
Happy V Day!

priyums said...

Beautifully written..Its a melody
My favourite lines are 'If u look into my eyes, you could see the happinest'

Jo said...

Happy V-Day Jeevan.

My days(Gops) said...

Happy Valentines Day Jeevan....
cheers !!!!!!!!!!

Jeevan said...

Amutha – its ok, thanks for commenting.:)

Reva – Same to u, its also my fav lines.

Truly Yours – I don’t know friend.:)

PK – nandri nanba.

Kathy – Happy Valentines Day, u too enjoy.

Jeevan said...

Kunsjoi – thanks friend, wish u the same.

Priyums – Welcome to my world. Thanks, u are very talented in Drawings.

Jo – Same to u my friend.

My_Days – Thank and wish u the same, Cheers.

visithra said...

Happy Valentine's Day dear :)

unknown said...

very nice....
Happy valentine day:-)

ashok said...

happy V'day...ensoiiii !!!

ashok said...

happy V'day...ensoiiii !!!

ashok said...

happy V'day...ensoiiii !!!

ashok said...

happy V'day...ensoiiii !!!

Jeevan said...

Visithra - Wish u the same visith.

Ammu - thanks, Happy V-Day

Ashok - thanks, u too enjoy.

Dubukku said...

enna Jeevan englibis kavithaiyellam kalakareenga :)) Enjoy your day mate :)

000000 said...

Hey, Thanks for the welcome to Blogger. Appreciate that.
Happy Valentines Day! Gorgeous poetry and beautiful pictures! Have an awesome day!

awakeningcoma said...

ayya saami un love thaangala

praveen said...

y lah am000nie ur sad...dont worry things will get better..

btw jeevan, nalla kavithai...so who is it dedicated to??namma kettai konjum sollenge....

Jeevan said...

Dubukku – Thanks friend. U too enjoy.

The unknown one – Thanks, welcome to my world, Same to u.:)

Jeevan said...

Awakening – ennapandrathu, lover’s dayku ethavathu aluthunumla.

Praveen – Thanks friend, that is secret, but nenga kakarathu nalla soldran, athu vanthu….. thadiketu irukan, kaduputhitha apuram soldran.:)

susubala said...

Lovely words. So touchy ! Whom it is dedicated to !

Jeevan said...

susubala - Thanks friend, is all to my Imaginary girl.

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