Tuesday, March 11, 2008

About she

she is so cute
just to fall in love at first sight,
caress with hair come by way
to stop and adore while she play

smaller eyelid, hairs to fall along views
looking at eyes to think display dolls,
but fair to move here and there
behave like a childish in manner
and oh she exist hither most

merrily going around and last I find her
to touch gently, she fluctuate in hesitate
might sweetly whispers in the silence
noticing our face a desire on her

dab in tenderness to fondling often
quietly attentive to buss moisture
extremely catwalks as she moves behind
in slender soft crus

look after, the time passes inexpensive
seems she always in playful mode
hops to remain, sweetness to fill within
rooms disturbed with fluid across, and
this little innocent bitch lack for bites.

12 comments:

Keshi said...

ooh lala who's SHE Jeevan? :)

Such a cute verse here.

Keshi.

Shiva said...

Hi Jeevan,

Who is this She? Ayesha of Ridder Huggard's She?

Can't be a women as there is a bitch at last!!

I'm back. Will go through all your posts I missed in these days.

-Shiva

Alok said...

Well well well ... have a great time :)


Alok

tulipspeaks said...

who is she? :S


ammu.

krystyna said...

Your beautiful poem and this beautiful video I put on my blog.
I'd like to have them for long.

Thank you, Jeevan!

Annie said...

You are a love poet here, Jeevan.

priya said...

Who is that sweet little baby Jeevan? Any pictures.

Kittu said...

ada ada ada
beautiful poet jeevan...kalakkals of chennai idhu :-)

BTW, yaar andha "SHE ?"

kittu mama

Macadamia The Nut said...

More than the words... I like the feeling you put behind it.
Bravo!

priya said...

Thaz one of my favorite song from Aasai:) Just hearing after a long time.

Azer Mantessa said...

hi jeevan,

arrived here from krys's. nice poem and video. am impressed with the song and the changing colors of her dress :-)

Jeevan said...

Keshi – Thanks dear :)

Shiva – Nice to see you back buddy :) yes, ur right, check the recent post to know who is she.

Alok – Thank you buddy :)

Ammu – She is maya, check todays post.

Krystyna - I was so glad you loved my poem, thank a lot for taking time to praise my writings and also make knowing others through you blog. :)

Annie - Thank you annie.

Priya – check today’s post with picture. Ya its soothing music...

Kittu – oh thanks a lot kittu mama :) u too check my today’s blog.

macadamia the nut – Thank you, and welcome here :)

azer – Thanks for you visit, and to check my poem :) the color changing is magic done my some television channel and not it comes along the original song.