The light come and fall
on dark green leaves to turn lighter,
and it moves in wind from shadow
to light, repeats often like
nature with day and night
Through web holes, breeze enters
with strong variation unlike later and
younger, which lack to freeing within;
though boundless in space even sun shines
throughout days and hide at nights
Light reflects upon blue wagon
glancing like a swimming ground,
looking at walls everywhere yellow
at end of the day it was orange and
somewhere it dawns different
Before it was near lighting forehead
disturbed, but rationally something pleasure
in the sense, even wind forbearing mild heat;
season moves, far away bringing shadow
still lustrous exist, but sadly I stopped walking
from spacious to worse towards narrow.
13 comments:
simply beautiful Jeevan!
Keshi.
nice...:)
how the passage of elements, reflect our observation. you have amazing observations bro, so natural.
YOur power of simple observation..is rare..you know that ?
**Light reflects upon blue wagon
glancing like a swimming ground,
looking at walls everywhere yellow
at end of the day it was orange and
somewhere it dawns different**
Beautiful !
Have a nice weekend dear.
Good one Jeevan. I agree what Ghost Particle said.
beautifully expressed observations Jeevan .... I love how original u r in ur thoughts
Alok
This is lovely and peaceful.
With warm hugs, my dear friend
Annie
very nice!.
Light and wind - worthy companions in life and in this poem.
a good description of surrounding
Keshi – Thank you dear :)
Vishesh – Thank you :)
GP – Thanks so much bro :)
Cinderella – Thanks a lot dear. it was simple a beautiful weekend I had!
Priya – Thank you.
Alok – Thank you buddy, encouraging words :)
Annie wicking – Thank you friend, have a wonderful writing always.
Shuuro – Thanks buddy, how are u?.... I hope you are doing well :)
Annie – Light and wind are important source of life is it. Thank you annie.
Azer – Thank you :)
yes, i'm fine. :)
Thank you Jeevan!
Amazing poem!
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