Saturday, March 29, 2008

Light and wind

The light come and fall
on dark green leaves to turn lighter,
and it moves in wind from shadow
to light, repeats often like
nature with day and night

Through web holes, breeze enters
with strong variation unlike later and
younger, which lack to freeing within;
though boundless in space even sun shines
throughout days and hide at nights

Light reflects upon blue wagon
glancing like a swimming ground,
looking at walls everywhere yellow
at end of the day it was orange and
somewhere it dawns different

Before it was near lighting forehead
disturbed, but rationally something pleasure
in the sense, even wind forbearing mild heat;
season moves, far away bringing shadow
still lustrous exist, but sadly I stopped walking
from spacious to worse towards narrow.

13 comments:

Keshi said...

simply beautiful Jeevan!

Keshi.

vishesh said...

nice...:)

Ghost Particle said...

how the passage of elements, reflect our observation. you have amazing observations bro, so natural.

Cinderella. said...

YOur power of simple observation..is rare..you know that ?

**Light reflects upon blue wagon
glancing like a swimming ground,
looking at walls everywhere yellow
at end of the day it was orange and
somewhere it dawns different**

Beautiful !

Have a nice weekend dear.

priya said...

Good one Jeevan. I agree what Ghost Particle said.

Alok said...

beautifully expressed observations Jeevan .... I love how original u r in ur thoughts


Alok

Annie Wicking and Loman Austen said...

This is lovely and peaceful.

With warm hugs, my dear friend

Annie

Shuuro said...

very nice!.

Annie said...

Light and wind - worthy companions in life and in this poem.

Azer Mantessa said...

a good description of surrounding

Jeevan said...

Keshi – Thank you dear :)

Vishesh – Thank you :)

GP – Thanks so much bro :)

Cinderella – Thanks a lot dear. it was simple a beautiful weekend I had!

Priya – Thank you.

Alok – Thank you buddy, encouraging words :)

Annie wicking – Thank you friend, have a wonderful writing always.

Shuuro – Thanks buddy, how are u?.... I hope you are doing well :)

Annie – Light and wind are important source of life is it. Thank you annie.

Azer – Thank you :)

Shuuro said...

yes, i'm fine. :)

krystyna said...

Thank you Jeevan!
Amazing poem!