Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Early monsoon

Rain is pouring throughout
and few flood instance count.
The increase in leap of frogs and toads
from the next compound, since
silence in there alarming siren

The first monsoon to our pup
scares the different flavor and sound
alarming leech stick to floors and walls
stamped to black brown mash.
Suddenly closed green, covers
the unscheduled outer space

In the extending pouring
young players play ball ashore
in wet and cold makeshift rain
the bills forgets someone’s glimpse;
envious everyone views
the taste of purest liquid drops

They dig up the sandy soil
the undisturbed brownish squeeze;
the blunt shadow of blues
behind and above universe
gives a quite pattern
the dews on windshield.

Chandrayaan-1 Launches Successfully! Congrats to Indian space mission and scientists.


Rakesh Vanamali said...

Hi Jeevan

Good post on the monsoons!

Personally, I hate that time of the year given how dull, sloppy and wet it continues to be



vishesh said...

ha it is beautiful indeed...i love this climate :D

krystyna said...

Hi Jeevan,
your keyboarts pen
is magical... creating such beautyful poem about that not always nice season.

Congratulations to Indian space mission and scientists! Great news!

Take care!

Priya said...

Very nice poem and its proud to see India on top:)

Keshi said...

Simply serene..


Jeeves said...


Ponniyinselvan said...

அன்பு ஜீவன்,
சின்ன சின்ன மழைத் துிளீகள் சேர்த்து வைப்போமே என்ற பாடல்தான் நினைவுக்கு வருகிறது.
கார்த்தி கல்லூரியில் [அண்ணா பல்கலையில் ] படிக்கும்போது இந்த பாடலுக்கு நடனம் ஆடியுள்ளான்.
மழை வேண்டும்.வரவேற்போம்.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice!!

Jeevan said...

Rakesh – Thank you! As we have more dry times here, the wet seems not usual so we like and little more green could do well.

Vishesh – Thank you… I too love this season :)

Krystyna – Thanks so much dear. the feel and excitement brings out the thing in us.

Priya – Thank you buddy :)

Keshi – Thanks dear :)

Jeeves – Thank you!

Ponniyinselvan – that’s my favourite song too and its nice bro danced to this beautiful song. Yes, certainly we want rain as if our needs and dreams to fill.

Andrew – welcome here, and thanks for dropping by :)

Shuuro said...

very nice picture Jeevan.