Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Wild dream

One night one dream
like a track rolled out train
one moment slipped my heart.

I don’t know who she was
such fair and strange
but she wasn’t whom I expected.
At first sight itself we hold hands
to unknown relationship
to suffer even after awaken

The words that spelled from her
is unexpectedly awe...
her luscious lips spoken way
is the sweetest...
anyhow the proposed place
mentally hesitated me at summit

She hasn’t left my hands holding
beside, sitting closer to me
by someone watching fire in eyes
I couldn’t face here visage
as it expresses love and desire
where I am conflict to answer
for her night proposal

Everyone seems indifferent around
leaving me at undiscerning mind
perhaps I am sustain to love
but unexpected a desire propose
and before it exit or continue
someone woke me arouse.

15 comments:

yamini meduri said...

beautiful.,...!!!

Lakshmi said...

sad that you woke up ..dreams are wonderful..nice poem

vishesh said...

i love dreams :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

awww so very cute. damn dreams, they r always broken at the crucial time. but i love dreams. :)

i liked the 1st stanza a lot. :)

krystyna said...

Just gorgeous, dear Jeevan!

Dreams are stronger than the real.
Very emotional.

Take care!

Annie Wicking said...

I love your poetry, Jeevan, so beautiful and so natural...

More, more, more please

Keshi said...

what an intense dream wow!

Keshi.

Jeeves said...

Wonderful Jeevan!!!!

Rakesh Vanamali said...

Well composed!

humanobserver said...

Wild dream :) Wild in nature :)

Miladysa said...

Dream lovers - perhaps they really exist somewhere? :D

Priya said...

Very cute.

Jeevan said...

Thanks so much dear friends. I appreciate all your comment :)

monsoon-dreams said...

may you find the same person in real life too:-)

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