Wednesday, April 01, 2009

Darkness

darkness

In darkness, world shines for tomorrow

In darkness, we save lights for future

In darkness, glow warm insects

In darkness, shades are indifference

In darkness, illusions are fear

In darkness, our shadows invisible

In darkness, I remind scare about terrace

In darkness, we seek someone’s aid

In darkness, lies the truth

In darkness, everyone is blind

In darkness, hides law and order

In darkness, born our lives

In darkness, tear and smile are same

In darkness, skin tones are same

In darkness, lighthouse direct ships

In darkness, neighbors get-together in past

In darkness, candle lights are precious

In darkness, we afraid of thunder flash to stole vision

In darkness, world dormant

In darkness, something exists and exits.

I wrote this in inspire of Earth Hour post across blog world.

15 comments:

Priya said...

Very true.

Vishesh said...

in darkness,
the light shines the brightest!

Kavi said...

The Earth Hour seems to have caught people's imagination !!

Well written.

Jeeves said...

Very nice:) Really nice of you to have such socially relevent post.

Dawn said...

Very much True dear...I really like your thoughts :)
Keep rocking
Cheers

Ash said...

"something exists and exits"

Brilliant work, Jeevan!

Keshi said...

WOW u wrote that so beautifully Jeevan! I loved it.

**In darkness, lies the truth

Spot on!

And in darkness, we see LIGHT.


:)

Keshi.

Devika Jyothi said...

Good one, Jeevan
an extensive coverage :)

I liked the earlier ones too, caught in a "Wild Dream? :))

On that German shepherd -- i read in an other blog....

btw, i tried so many times in between..your blog wasn't downloading...do not know why :)

love,
devika

man in painting said...

nice one, jeevan..
wishes..

gP said...

brilliant lines nanba, well done :)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

wowww,,, too good and so very true :)

Jeevan said...

Thanks everyone, u r support and encourage keeps me active on thoughts and to express.

monsoon dreams said...

hi jeevan,
wonderful poem,dear.the line i liked the most is ,'in darkness skin tones are the same'.how true!u got a creative mind.keep writing...

humanobserver said...

I am glad that you dedicated this poem to "earth hour." Well-composed.

Indrani said...

So well written, Jeevan!