Friday, June 01, 2012

Sky Gazing

Image courtesy: Google
I just want to touch the sky

I just want to blow the wind

I just want to kiss the clouds

I just want to signal the stars

I just want to paint the moon

Using the colors of rainbow;

I just want to draw a rangoli

Using the dots of stars;

I just want to write a letter

Using the galaxy to my eternal love;

I just want to eliminate from the earth

To fetch the golden opportunity of stars

The silver jubilee of moon

Under the limelight of yellow sun.

Footnote: Just nothing to do last night while the power goes off…  I penned this poem using the mobile phone, inspired by sky gazing.


Irfanuddin said...

and even i want to touch that blue sky above my head.....

beautiful words Jeevan.

Rahul Bhatia said...

Nice verse:)

Ash said...

Perfect! I love the image too!

TexWisGirl said...

it is wonderful. and longing.

venus66 said...

Hi, beautiful. Write more.

Simran said...

''Using the dots of stars;
I just want to write a letter''

Me too wish the same :)

Cheers, You know, me too write all my poems in my mobile phone and save it as draft because when feelings and thoughts come at a moment and are expressed at the same time are shaped perfect!

This was a beautiful poem
Keep writing dear :)

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George said...

You made good use of the power outage. I like your poem very much.

eden said...

Nice poem. Love it.

♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫ said...

Simple words. But penned so beautifully :)

Jeevan said...

Thank you everyone for the kind words and wises :)

Simran – Thanks for sharing and glad u wish for... I truly agree with u on instant expression and it’s rewarding than recollecting and writing down later.

Have a nice week ahead :)

Anonymous said...

I like this very much. Well written.

Kalyan said...

Just beautiful lines along with the photo!