in a sultry outfit, that ready to lose grip;
she let me feel and caress her body
showing her back prone to bed.
she let me feel and caress her body
showing her back prone to bed.
My fingers like a fern feather
moved on her back, tickling;
while for her to embarrass now
grabbing a pillow for grip.
moved on her back, tickling;
while for her to embarrass now
grabbing a pillow for grip.
She leant her legs probably
feeling butterflies fluttering inside;
while I drew along her spine
barely open to bare back.
feeling butterflies fluttering inside;
while I drew along her spine
barely open to bare back.
She seemed insensible
as respond to my love and ecstatic;
an embarrassment felt allover
while I kissed at her rear neck.
Footnote: Just another fantasy in feel of love and desire ;)
as respond to my love and ecstatic;
an embarrassment felt allover
while I kissed at her rear neck.
Footnote: Just another fantasy in feel of love and desire ;)
15 comments:
Very romantic and sensual.
You express your fantasies very beautifully.
Very romantic..... Made me tingle--thinking of my hubby!!!!
Betsy
you are transforming into a mature writer now Jeevan...
very sweet!
beautiful poem
So romantic and sweet.
Jeevan
whats this? Your blog is switching to another color !!!!any ??????????????some of your posts make me doubt that you are in love with somebody..hope this doubt comes true.
karthik +amma
its tough to put out fantasies and romantic ideas in writing.. good one Jeevan!!
I agree with the others, this poem is so sweet and romantic.. :)
Hi, Jeevan,
Have a great weekend!
just one word Wow n beautiful..
sensuous n touching !!!!
filled with the fragrance of romance...
Beautifully penned....:)
Beautiful and romantic poem
thanks for sharing
Thanks for those sweet comments ;) I never though i could come up with such romantic thoughts and feeling! Lol
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