Wishful glance on white spherein a great wish eyes craves forever
but surprisingly rarely sometimes
as bright as never before
like white wonder on sky
swinging form mother earth
to fly into white blossom
a bright yellow star above
like many more young,
the high beams to keep awake
throughout night till it dawns
doubts on its nature
weather in only times of summer
like sun was hotter
moon would be coldest
blinking its the secret of brightness
taking away the terrace
sprinkling water to cool the heat
laying heads next to next
facing the black endless screen
counting the twinkling stars on it
bringing the moon between fingers
in a little fear about universe
50 comments:
Hey Jeevs..
Nice poem :)
What is the plan for the weekend ?
Good poem Jeevan,
//bringing the moon between fingers//
i do sometime ...:)
Nice poem.
Hi Jeevan!
Your poetry is beautiful!
Keep up!
Have a great Sunday!
Nice poem and awesome picture of the moon.did you take that pic.
whooooaa gold!
Keshi.
i like this! :)
ammu.
Finely penned, Jeev!
looking forward to reading more from you!
Hi Jeevan!
How are you?
A beautifully captured shot along with a lovely poem!
great narration...beautiful.
As usual...: Lovely !
beautiful.....
Helloo
whr r ya?
wow - beautiful imagery!
where r u Jeevan? Hope ur doin ok.
TC
Keshi.
Hi buddy..all well ? Its been some time ..
Jeevan,
soo long, we miss you!
A lot of blessings to you!
bro...where r u?
Hi Jeevan
awesome man....
and the picture....cool too
TC
Jeevan,
Are you OK? Internet connectivity problem?
Hope to see you soon.
Jeevan,
Everything is alright?? hope to see you soon buddy..
bro...hmm this is worrying...please send some msg to someone to post about ur wherebouts.
heyyyyy...
this isnt fair!!
whatever happened?
Whatz happening at ur side Jeevan? Is everything ok ther??
Jeevan this is my 2nd msg to ya...U OK?
Keshi.
okay...wait...somebody has to know him! please find out any jeevans friends can you please comment of his wherbouts.
DOES ANYONE HERE KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO JEEVAN????
Keshi.
Ghosty plz find out!
tnxx!
Keshi.
hey..whats up with you man. Worried now. ..
We miss you so much Jeevan!
Take care!
For all those worried about Jeevan:-
I called Jeevan this morning and found that he is quite alright. I spoke to him for few minutes and found that his motherboard had gone and is waiting for his upgrade or new computer and hence there is not much activity on his blog. He also expressed his inability to visit a internetcafe. Though he is not browsing, his minds and thoughts are with all of us. Let us hope that he gets a new computer and back with us.
Don't worry be happy!
Balaji!!
Thx for turning out to be a real life-saver!! :) Great to know that everything is hale and hearty with Jeev!!
Be back soon!!
Thanks for this inform. I have this same problem.
Balaji ty so much for that piece of info abt Jeevan!! Thank God he's ok.
Keshi.
hes going to have a whole lot of emails to check! :D thanx Balaji Sar!
tx balaji
Missed this poem for a long time. Glad that I visited the blog today. Hope to see you soon, Jeevan
Thanks for sharing Balaji:)) Good to know he is all well.
hey jeevan hw r u...sorry i cudnt peep in for a long time..appuram konjam konajam ippo dhaan returning back to normalcy..so hws life thr..
ohh jeevz,
sitting with bad motherboard there?! come back soon.
we were worried abt your conspicuous absence from blog world!
Nice poem Jeevan.
Wrote a story with the gist that you gave :)
nice. btw to get rid off the blue border around the pics in your blog, add this to your template (between the style tags)
img { border: 0 }
Thanks for the info Balaji.
Hope to have him back in blogs soon.
ammu.
Let happiness be with you, Jeevan!
Wow!!!
Beautiful poem..
The Strange and ovely white..
TAke care
Jeevs..u have been tagged :)
en blog pakkam oru murai vandhu ponga :)
hello jeevan,
nalla irukeengala, its beena long time since i stopped at your blog, will start reading as and when i have time. hope you are doing well and by the way nice poem
-Prasanna
hope u computer will be back to normal - take care dear
hey jeevan.... nice to see your still blogging... i am back to blogging just now.... very nice poem.... hope your keeping well... sorry i have not been able to be in touch....
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