alike a vessel
it floated on the wind
before landing on my terrace
The wind blow it to the corner
recklessly, against the wall
the desperate leaf
sought my attention voluntarily
At a foot tough distance
laying like a reckless zero
the leaf reveals in yellowish
holding a scar on its surface.
The soft fragile leaf
caress while grabble in fingers
and wholly gratify
holding a whole leaf
I wish for this peepal leaf
shaped in heart-in
and cause piping
to fold in as a pipe to blow.
The light delicate leaf
inspires me to bring home
and thus I kept somewhere
to forget to remember today,
the leaf turned frailly more
It was a rough experience
touching the leaf
and due to rigid and vein
the leaf expose to golden hue.
17 comments:
Hi Jeevan!
You are talented poet and photographer. Very well writen poem!
This black background is perfect for golden leaf.
Really great photo!
Take care my dear friend!
Unique shot Jeevan :-)
And you are a fantastic poet !!!!!
I read it twice :)))))))))
Enjoy your evening
Kareltje =^.^=
Anya :-)
Lovely poem and photo
Jeevan..loved the poem and the picture.You are so talented.
Excellent piece buddy. That which failed many other eyes, captured yours.
Great picture and some nicely written lines to go with it!
Read that in under a minute, such was the flow.
The following stanzas stood out for me especially original expressions like "reckless zero" and "holding a scar on its surface!" :)
Keep it up Jeevan - as I always say, your poetry is so full of nature's simple joys and therefore of "LIFE"!!!
"The wind blow it to the corner
recklessly, against the wall
the desperate leaf
sought my attention voluntarily
At a foot tough distance
laying like a reckless zero
the leaf reveals in yellowish
holding a scar on its surface."
Well done ! Well done ! Super duper
very well expressed..beautiful picture too
Very sweet poem.
And what a lovely leaf !
What a lovely golden leaf. I must say that you are not only a good photographer but also a very good poet. Absolutely wonderful poem. Each and every word is so nice that I read your poem thrice.
Lovely poem and that golden leaf represents the human touch of kindness.
Jeevz,
In my current situation..leaf represent something else...nice one..
good poem.You are becoming finer and finer. and the photo is extremely captivating.
karthik amma
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you...
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