glisten brightly like her
who sits beside me
on this full moon night
We never know each other
and ever gonna know
but I enjoy her presence
and adore each gesture silently
She don’t mind me seeing her
because she never know
I admiring her beauty, since beside
she kept giggling with her friend
Words become silence to express – her beauty
because she’s a beautiful flower
resume always fresh in mind
ever still without fading away
Sometime her keen eyes wander sky
lips whisper something sweet – and gesture
which I never understand
unless I become a friend alike hers
The wander eyes come pause
when she adjust her hair
leaving behind her salwar scarf
she expresses an excellent style!
The active eyelid closes
when she comes into mind;
and I come across many lasses
but none stays like her in mind (e).
PS: Something beautiful happens a year before but only now get inspired to write about. The picture above was taken by me on a full moon night lately in beach, where a couple or perhaps lovers sitting ashore in the company of moon light and whispering waves which bears the silver shadows of the moon. I was just focusing on the moon and its shadows, but it comes out lovely with the couple inside. So sweet isn’t it. :)
14 comments:
So sweet, indeed!
Very nice photo and poem.
nanri thalaiva
Beautiful.Loved it Jeevan.
The photo as well as the poem are simply amazing. Each and every lines are touching. Very beautifully written. You are very much talented Jeevan as you have such a nice poem. Great post.
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Gorgeous!
Been missing your posts of late. Feels wonderful to be back! Thanks for your support!
amazing pic and beautiful words!
at times..unnoticed interruptions make things even more beautiful..
We never know each other
and ever gonna know
but I enjoy her presence
and adore each gesture silently
She don’t mind me seeing her
because she never know
I admiring her beauty, since beside
she kept giggling with her friend
simply beautyful...
Jeevan, I loved the poetry and that too when its coming from you on love :)
We all love to be in love and I am pretty sure its people like us will spread the soothingness of love in the world :)
I wish your dream come true one day - the moon will be there but beside you there will be a sweet heart for sure :)
Keep writing
Cheers dear - God Bless You!
so sweet n the pics you does add extra Romance into it....
best wishes,
irfan.
Beautiful. The mood is captured perfectly.
After reading every word, I just thought for a minute and somehow couldn't think of a word which will justify the beauty of this poem, so I would just say you we could really feel the entire ambiance.
Loved your new blog header.
wowwwww........ simply wowwww.... Jeevan look at this photo. see what a wonderful photographer you are. i have been reading your blog for quite a long time and i can surely tell that with every shot you are improving like anything. kudos to you. :)
wowwwww........ simply wowwww.... Jeevan look at this photo. see what a wonderful photographer you are. i have been reading your blog for quite a long time and i can surely tell that with every shot you are improving like anything. kudos to you. :)
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