rather strings attached, secures
the moon across sky
That’s calm and uncool
was haunted by bats, trying
to battle down moon.
was haunted by bats, trying
to battle down moon.
In the twilight hour
waked up from asleep, the bats
influence fiction.
waked up from asleep, the bats
influence fiction.
PS. Though titled fiction,
the haiku was inspired by the evening sight outside my home. Pic courtesy: google
6 comments:
The bats influence fiction... I like that line! Creepy. I can imagine them fluttering by in the darkness.
"Trying to battle down moon" good imagination...
You write very well. I really liked your writing
Bats sometimes make me nervous, but I like the way they fly fast avoiding humans most of the time. Nice pic, that.
Destination Infinity
I really like this haiku.
Loving this!!
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