Friday, March 21, 2008

Expression

In rolling trike, kids rejoice
deep silence nature, motionless leaves
cloudy outlook space
speech-less kid expressing vocal

Teardrops left flowing most dawns
freedom for this kid pushes within walls
outlives goodness for a craving kid, to
playing with parent’s expressing happiness

Hardly collected raindrops sweeps
dissolves and run exterior invisibly
spreading everywhere the colors
spreader near gateway expressing holi

Clouds come and go, last sometime though
to drop its burden to clear heat and go,
by blowing freshness in air everywhere
sighting nature is ardent expressing gladden.

26 comments:

Alok said...

Pain mixed with a sense of mojo .. well done


Alok

Azer Mantessa said...

am lost for a while there ... deep

"freedom for this kid pushes within walls" caught me most ...

one thing for sure, when kids do express themselves, it's quite pure and honest ... the way they see things is a bit different and that's intrigue me most.

Ghost Particle said...

nice how you observer the passing moments that just happen...it ignores us but we dont ignore it.

Fenridal said...

See here or here

Keshi said...

very beautifully written Jeevan!

I loved it.

Clouds come n go...and yes it's raining in my blog..a beautiful rain. Go check it out :)

*HUGZ*

Keshi.

Jim said...

Jeevan
u r life personified

Krys and Keshi directed me here
be my friend

i will be honoured if u accept

Jim said...

and i hope your stuff is not copyrighted

I will be borrowing your stuff for my blog ON HEROES

flyingstars said...

Hi Jeevan....this is a simply lovely poignant poem...so evocative...Wish U a Happy Holi. May this Holi brings a lot of joy and happiness in our life & Wish that your life becomes colorful as the colors of Holi..


I am a bit too busy with my work now, which will continue, so couldn't visit your blog for sometime...anyway, I will check your other posts later whenever I will get the break.

krystyna said...

Hi Jeevan!
Thank you for this beautiful poem!

Congratulation! Our friend Keshi, wrote about you:

"He has never been mean to anyone, never said anything to hurt a single soul and has always been a gentleman in his thoughts, words and deeds."
and more.
Very true! She made great job!

Wishing you a good health and happiness!

Itz me!!! said...

you are truly gifted in terms of how good your expressions of words are !!!!

Anonymous said...

"He has never been mean to anyone, never said anything to hurt a single soul and has always been a gentleman in his thoughts, words and deeds."
and more.


Krys
he dare not
he has muscular malfunction

Anonymous said...

I have had motor neurone disease for practically all my adult life. Yet it has not prevented me from having a very attractive family, and being successful in my work.

This is thanks to the help I have received from Jane, my children, and a large number of other people and organisations. I have been lucky, that my condition has progressed more slowly than is often the case. But it shows that one need not lose hope.
Stephen Hawking

his disability http://www.hawking.org.uk/disable/dindex.html
his work http://www.hawking.org.uk/

Posted by Jim at 2:58 AM 1 comments

backpakker said...

beautiful imagery ..lovely verses

vishesh said...

impress words can,paint they can a person.

Annie Wicking and Loman Austen said...

What a wonderful poem.. I can hear the children at play.

Peace and happiness, my dear friend.

Best wishes
Annie

Annie said...

It is now the season when I shall see small children playing on their tricycles and scooters more and more. I do love to see them laughing and enjoying the day.

Mythily said...

Good one Jeevan...

தூயா [Thooya] said...

//Hardly collected raindrops sweeps
dissolves and run exterior invisibly
spreading everywhere the colors
spreader near gateway expressing holi//

no words to express

Shiva said...

Jeevan,

There is a pleasure in pain and your words prove that.

Profound and compassionate!

Ghost Particle said...

jeevs...all well bro?

tulipspeaks said...

rain.. one of the best thing nature has given to us! :)
hw have u been jeevan?

ammu.

Ponniyinselvan said...

jeevan,
i wonder whether "SUN" also reads your blog.see, earlier ,i have asked you to write about 'scorching sun'..no doubt,HE might have read it, and in response has changed his mind not to burn us heavily, and so has sent torrential rain.
who will not become an ardent admirer of my dear jeevan?
"NEED it be said that my POET is perfecting day by day?
I too confine myself within four walls.
life will be happier to you.
BLESSINGS
karthik amma

Jeevan said...

Alok – Thanks so much buddy, hope you had a wonderful times on weekend :)

Azer – yes, its very true. Thank a lot azer, you must have more experience with there activites.

GP – Thank you bro. I am doing well, just was out of interest to post. Check for something in today’s post one of my favorite.

Keshi – you made my weekend very special with your flying kiss :) dear, I love you so much and thanks a lot for bring there for me. Hugsss. I hope you are having some extreme pleasures with cousins.

Jim – Welcome to my world. Thanks for the great effort to honour me. Sure, I will not stop you from borrowing if u like :)

Kalyan – Thanks so much buddy. Hope you have a memorably Holi celebrations at home with almost. Take your own time to continue visiting and also take care.

Krystyna – Thank you dear friend! You and keshi made my day to send me flying across happily. I am honored to stay at your hearts. Thanks :)

Its Me!!! – Welcome here, nice having you after some long time. Hope everything goes right there :)

Anonymous (is that u jim?) – I know him and he inspire more people like me. Thanks for your comment, I need to learn more on his life and will do it.

Backpacker – Thank you :)

Vishesh – Welcome here, and thanks for you visit.

Annie wicking – Thank you annie and for the kind wishes.

Annie - the innocence of children makes everyone adore. Enjoy watching kids playing.

Mythily – Thank you :)

Thooya – Thank you dear :)

Shiva – Thanks for your support buddy, hope the new city give new experience and pleasure.

Ammu – Very true, rain is a big nature to rejoice. I am doing fine ammu, hope u are doing well too.

Ponniyinselvan – But that day itself the sun hides and rain started to pore. Thank you for the encouragement and as also your love. Take care ma :)

Alok said...

Who is the first anonymous .... and whoever it is Can I request you to atleast keep away ur nonsense from here ...

Alok

priya said...

Clouds come and go coz that is life and we enjoy when it rains and protects under the sun.

Ash said...

Beautifully written...Jeevan.