Thursday, June 14, 2012

Embarrassing moment

She came leaving me at embarrass
in a sultry outfit, that ready to lose grip;
she let me feel and caress her body
showing her back prone to bed.

My fingers like a fern feather
moved on her back, tickling;
while for her to embarrass now
grabbing a pillow for grip.

She leant her legs probably
feeling butterflies fluttering inside;
while I drew along her spine
barely open to bare back.

She seemed insensible
as respond to my love and ecstatic;
an embarrassment felt allover
while I kissed at her rear neck.

Footnote: Just another fantasy in feel of love and desire ;)


Anonymous said...

Very romantic and sensual.

George said...

You express your fantasies very beautifully.

Betsy from Tennessee said...

Very romantic..... Made me tingle--thinking of my hubby!!!!

ashok said...

you are transforming into a mature writer now Jeevan...

TexWisGirl said...

very sweet!

sm said...

beautiful poem

Linda said...

So romantic and sweet.

Ponniyinselvan said...

whats this? Your blog is switching to another color !!!!any ??????????????some of your posts make me doubt that you are in love with somebody..hope this doubt comes true.
karthik +amma

Ramya Ranganathan said...

its tough to put out fantasies and romantic ideas in writing.. good one Jeevan!!

Eden said...

I agree with the others, this poem is so sweet and romantic.. :)

eden said...

Hi, Jeevan,

Have a great weekend!

Jyoti Mishra said...

just one word Wow n beautiful..
sensuous n touching !!!!

Irfanuddin said...

filled with the fragrance of romance...

Beautifully penned....:)

Anonymous said...

Beautiful and romantic poem

thanks for sharing

Jeevan said...

Thanks for those sweet comments ;) I never though i could come up with such romantic thoughts and feeling! Lol