Thursday, June 28, 2012

Heart gets hurt

Deep in heart I get hurt
The reckless words shatter
And cut pierce my veins
Leaving me at impatient call
When insane people talk
Insensible and extremely intolerable; 

Money is a matter
Cut slice the heart layers
No matter how well and deep u loved
A minute exchange of phrases
Cuts off the ever lasting relationship
You believed lifelong.

In someone’s system of love
The gratitude and attitude is nothing
Once the program is completed;
People whose interaction is almost gadget
Applies the same technique in relationship
Which Sign-offs immediately.


George said...

Your poem is sad, but beautiful. I think all of us have faced heartache at some time in our lives.

Simran said...

I loved the message you conveyed in this poetry. Each word and each action means a lot to build up a long lasting relationship... Words when used being thoughtless can break many of the hearts,believe and relations because everywhere there is someone admiring you...

You expressed in a unique style using technical words...! Great!

Linda said...

A heartfelt and lovely poem.

Betsy from Tennessee said...

Hi Jeevan, I'm so sorry about your heart-break. We've all experienced that in our lives I'm sure. I know how much it hurts...

BUT---you'll make it out of this, and come back a better man and a happier man in the future...

Hang in there.

Anonymous said...

Love and relationships can be painful.

Hang in there!

eden said...

A sad and well written poem.

Lakshmi said...

It hurts..I can relate to it, but then everything gets healed over time..stay happy

Jyoti Mishra said...

A minute exchange of phrases
Cuts off...
so true..sometimes words are too painful to endure..

I loved the last verse.. superb
in modern life..
ppl have become too techno savvy that they've begun to take human relationships and emotions in the same way.. !!!

Kalyan said...

Can't agree more with your thoughts...striking poignant words!

venus66 said...

I can understand how hurting it is.Only time can heal. A very good write from you.

Ponniyinselvan said...

I have come across 100s of such betrayal.Felt like torn apart into 1000 pieces. Bleeding heart.
console yourself.