The distance were not so farI saw her caressing her open hair
and another hand hold close to her ear
helps listening to someone
to whom she whisper through her cell phone.
The always inspiring wind
went ahead like never to unwind
to stop her tress floating in air
that prevent giving clear picture of her aspect
stressed to various gestures
respond to the never hold out cell phone.
The opportunity seems not so favor
leaving her not so longer on terrace
for me to admire the beauty from courtyard
aside the evening breeze and setting of sun gleam
the girl’s sight is an additional enhance,
who was in love already with her cell phone. :D
Footnote:
Thought of a girl whom I checked lately on an open terrace... came to mind after reading a romantic poem from my friend Dawn... inspired to write it down.
Updated the Congenial song (check sidebar on right) with Azhaipaya (will u call) from Tamil movie Kadhalil Sodhapuvadhu Yeppadi. One of my recent fav, to go well with this post.
13 comments:
good to see u try romantic poetry...keep it up
This was pretty romantic!
So romantic!
Nice. Something different from your usual write.
hmmm...spring has fully engulfed your heart it seems...lovely words and the poem indeed!
that was an awesome poem :)
very romantic indeed :D
its so nice
New blogstyle Jeevan
I like it :-)
hugs from us all
Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<
nice & romantic
thanks for visiting my blog
You've created a very romantic and beautiful word picture with your description of the girl on her phone.
Thanks a lot for your appreciation and sharing your thought on poem! It's encourage to write more on this series of love and romance... let see what come across. :)
A beautiful romantic poem..
Thank you for sharing
You always write good poems, Jeevan..
Have a great day always.
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