Though there were many beauties
none were like her beautiful
beautifully, with young petals;
and since my eyes saw her
it deny to close lids
Savor sweet those tender lips
soft and unharmed rose cheeks
she smiles innocently, opening her lips;
and pretty in pink wear
she caught up my eyes in cold weather
For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.
I can’t be here as well as there these days, since I caught up with cold and fever from last Saturday. Doing good only today, I will be at regular soon… taking care all! :)
13 comments:
hmmmmm...a young boy writing about rose..something fishy here :))
nice poem and a beautiful photo, Jeevan :)
takecare...i will see you again by month-end may be, am going home :)
wishes,
devika
I meant writing so romantically about rose :)
devika
Take care Jeevan
take the rest you need,
I hope you are feeling better soon:)
Wonderful rose and a BEAUTIFUL poem
:)
For women eyelids are beautiful
for flower petals are beautiful
eyelids would close, not the bloomed flower;
whatever else flowers are beautiful
whereas closed or opened its petals.
----------------- how sweet it was dear. i loved reading it. n yes d pic is beautiful too.
get well soon :)
Take care Jeevan. Hope you feel better ! soon
Take care.. get well soon :)
Whats cooking my friend? Romance and rose? All in very lucid descriptions......! :)
Hope you are doing well, now!
oh it is so sweet and romantic :)
Lovely rose. Wonderful poem.Hope you are much better now. Take care.
Rose is everyone's sweetheart and one special one from us for you to get well soon....lovely photo & the words...Take care of your health & Stay well mate!
Good poem... Different one jeevan...
You have taken lovely shot of the beautiful pink rose. I appreciate for the wonderful poem. I liked it very much.
Wonderful post....
Hope you feel better soon.
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