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| Picture by Jeevan |
There we’re sitting next together
solely under the stunning moonlight;
admiring the silky shadow, ballet
on the surface of ocean ripples.
admiring the silky shadow, ballet
on the surface of ocean ripples.
The cold sea breeze brushes us near
while the warmth inside embrace dear;
the moon chuckles looking at us giggle
to tickle and prattle in private privilege.
while the warmth inside embrace dear;
the moon chuckles looking at us giggle
to tickle and prattle in private privilege.
We have no idea what future beholds
even the presence of nature is unpredictable
but the moment being together, I feel
I could combat anything tries to battle us aside.
even the presence of nature is unpredictable
but the moment being together, I feel
I could combat anything tries to battle us aside.
The shining florescent moon bakes
a silver sandwich, using the sky and sand
as two dark layers impound to nightfall veil
gives space for us unfolding our secret fondle.
a silver sandwich, using the sky and sand
as two dark layers impound to nightfall veil
gives space for us unfolding our secret fondle.
We express desire along whisper
of waves
while either of us inclines on one another
grasping the arms to crab tease or caress
in fondle beside cherish moonlit night.
while either of us inclines on one another
grasping the arms to crab tease or caress
in fondle beside cherish moonlit night.
Footnote:
The poem is an inspiration on
the scene I captured (the photo above) at our nearby beach on Sunday. The evening was early to
full moon night; I had a wonderful opportunity to capture the moon’s silver
shadow falling on the sea and with the presence of a pair or couple, enhanced
the scene into a perfect romantic evening. This is my second time to land upon
a moonlit night where a couple come sat in front of the sea, where the silver
shadow falls exactly or I come across the scene.
16 comments:
Very fine photograph (as always) and exquisite lines to match (as always too!). I cannot help but respect (and sometimes envy :D) the freshness of your phraseology. I thought that the following expressions/strings of words were delightful:
"ballet
on the surface of ocean ripples[...]"
"[...]prattle in private privilege[...]"
The best of them all in my opinion: "The shining florescent moon bakes
a silver sandwich [...]"
Keep it up Jeevan!
What an amazing image to capture!! And beautiful writing. I think that moonlight reflecting off of water is one of the most beautiful things in the world.
Your photograph and the poem are beautiful. Inspiration really did come to you Sunday evening.
beautiful capture..
and those words were like cherry on the cake... made it much more lovely..
Moonlight the thing which covers us all equally but make us feel differently..
beautiful photo and great imagery in the poem, too. i liked this line especially: the silky shadow, ballet
on the surface of ocean ripples
very nice jeevan
Lovely photo and wonderful poem...
This may be one of your BEST poems... Talk about inspiration!!!!! You got it! I loved it --and the photo was great too.
Hugs,
Betsy
The photo is very nice. I should try to photograph the sea on a full-moon night, as well.
Destination Infinity
Beautiful poem and the picture is perfect.
beautiful photo ... excellent captured...
nice lines that expresses the photo
thanks
Lovely lovely lovely photograph Jeevan!
And the poetry is getting better and better:-)
this is one of your best posts...
you capture an image and then be inspired by it to scribble a lovely poem...
Lovely shot and romantic words.
That's a lovely photo to inspire your beautiful,poetry.
Fantastic read Jeevan.
Lovely pic too.
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